Comment on the following statement: Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages. What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement? Write 200–250 words. Use the following plan:− make an introduction (state the problem)
− express your personal opinion and give 2–3 reasons for your opinion
− express an opposing opinion and give 1–2 reasons for this opposing opinion
− explain why you don’t agree with the opposing opinion
− make a conclusion restating your position
Nowadays it is popularly believed that school is a place where pupils should concentrate on studying. However, there are others who claim that working part-time has many advantages. I would like to explain my point of view on this problem.
In my opinion while we are studying at school we shouldn't work. First of all, people should study hard and decently because their future depends on it. Secondly, if parents pay for our education we shouldn't let them down so our result connecting with concentration.
On the other hand, some people claim that it is better decision to try part-time job than dedicate all time to studying. These people are con
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